Thank you for the kind words, Scott! And thank you for reading! Hopefully you’d tell me when my fly is down; people usually don’t say anything and I’ll realize about two hours into my work day that my pants have been unzipped all morning, LOL. So I genuinely appreciate it.

Anyways, I will take a look at reworking that part. It also strikes me as interesting, now that you bring it up, that I call out her back story as a something that sounds like it was ripped out of American mythology, yet I don’t actually say anything about her backstory. So that definitely needs to be fixed as well.